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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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India is under continues terrorism threat. Sunday, 15 bombs blasted in city, the IT hub, in which one live was lost, it was aim to create panic and fear among corporate world, specially MNCs. On Monday, 18 bombs exploded in Ahmedabad in which over 50 lives were lost. Followed by that till now around 25 bombs has been defused in
  

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India is under continues terrorism threat a continuous threat from terrorism . On Sunday [this will quickly date] , 15 bombs blasted exploded in Bangalore city, the IT hub, in which and one live l ife was lost . it was aim The aim was to create panic and fear among the corporate world, e specially MNCs.

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  • India is under continues terrorism threat a continuous threat from terrorism .
  • On Sunday [this will quickly date] , 15 bombs blasted exploded in Bangalore city, the IT hub, in which and one live l ife was lost .
  • it was aim The aim was to create panic and fear among the corporate world, e specially MNCs.
  • On Monday, 18 bombs exploded in Ahmedabad in which and over 50 lives were lost.
  • Followed by that till now Since then, [this will quickly date; you may want to say "in the days following ...
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India is under continues terrorism threat a continuous threat from terrorism. On Sunday [this will quickly date], 15 bombs blasted exploded in Bangalore city, the IT hub, in which and one live life was lost. it was aim The aim was to create panic and fear among the corpo
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Thanks Mr. Wordy for your kind help
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