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Pavithra Kumari Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please correct the message

I dont knw if I can get assistance for such senarios.
But i thought the could also be one of the ways to improve better writing.

Please correct the below, let me know if there are any mistakes
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Hi, Sorry to bother you. I just thought of checking if you have any updates from your parents. I forget to ask in the middle of work, since this is the only job my dad have for now, he kept asking my mom, and it slowly came to my ears today. I know its kinda weird to follow up on such matters. Just let me know if its matching, not matching.
  

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Pavithra Kumari I just thought of checking if you 've have any updates from your parents. I don't understand what follows.

  • Pavithra Kumari I just thought of checking if you 've have any updates from your parents.
  • I don't understand what follows.
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Pavithra KumariI just thought of checking if you've have any updates from your parents.
I don't understand what follows.
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I cannot understand your writing well, either, but maybe this is what you mean?—

Hi. Sorry to bother you. I just wanted to check if you have had any updates from your parents. I forgot to ask during work. Since this is the only job my dad has now, he kept asking my mom, and it finally came to my ears today. I know it's kind of weird to follow up on such matters. Just let me know if it'

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