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Complaint Letter on placement of transformer

To
APEPDC Ltd.
Visakhapatnam.
Sub: Shifting the transformer
Respected Sir,
This is to bring in your kind notice that recently, placed a new transformer in our place which is infront of our house. We prayed for shifting the transformer which was erect in front of our house inspite of our objection. We have own house. Door No: 33-10-12, Karanala Street, Allipuram, Vizag -4. Pole Number 70A/11. The Assistant Engineer, Karanala Street, Allipuram has erected a transformer in front of the house. We have facing so many problems. One problem is water pipe lines are leaked. Incase pipe lines are leaked. They dug the whole so that pole will be fell down. Another one is it is nearby house. Children and family members are easily touched electrical wires. It is very dangerous for us. Please visit and see its life treating. I request you to shift the new transformer somewhere in our area. I already told Mr. AE but he didn’t take any action on it. He is very careless and irresponsible. He cannot take in mind. Please take an action on him.
I request to you to take an action on asap basis.
  

Top answer

To APEPDC Ltd. Visakhapatnam. Re: Relocating the Transformer Dear Sir, This letter serves to bring your attention to the fact that a new transformer was recently placed in front of my house.

  • To APEPDC Ltd.
  • Visakhapatnam.
  • Re: Relocating the Transformer Dear Sir, This letter serves to bring your attention to the fact that a new transformer was recently placed in front of my house.
  • My family and I have prayed for the transformer, which was erected in front of our house in spite of our objections, to be relocated elsewhere.
  • Our house is at Door No: 33-10-12, Karanala Street, Allipuram, Vizag -4.
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To APEPDC Ltd.
Visakhapatnam.
Re: Relocating the Transformer

Dear Sir,

This letter serves to bring your attention to the fact that a new transformer was recently placed in front of my house. My family and I have prayed for the transformer, which was erected in front of our house in spite of our objections, to be relocated elsewhere. Our house is at Door No: 33-10-12,
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Thanks. Can I say it complaint on placement of transformer.
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Yes. You can put it in the beginning of the letter, where I wrote "Re:"

Re: Complaint about the Placement of a Transformer

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