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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Please correct the grammar

He specializes in assisting clients with maximizing state tax compliance efficiency. He has over 8 years of experience in managing large tax compliance projects for broad range of companies including financial services, manufacturing and tele communiation companies
  

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Anonymous over 8 years Your sentence is good. However, I prefer ' more than 8 years'.

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  • Anonymous over 8 years Your sentence is good.
  • However, I prefer ' more than 8 years'.
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Anonymousover 8 years
Your sentence is good. However, I prefer 'more than 8 years'.
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Anonymousmaximizing state tax compliance efficiency
You have a five-noun pile up, which makes it difficult for your reader to get through to your meaning. I suggest untangling:

He specializes in helping clients efficiently comply with state tax regulations.

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Anonymous for a broad range of companies
Anonymous manufacturing and telecommunications companies.
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