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Shas Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

please correct the grammar

I didn’t receive it yet. Please give to Hameed, I can collect from him whenever he visits my site.
  

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The grammar is correct. The comma after "Hameed" should be a period.

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  • The comma after "Hameed" should be a period.
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The grammar is correct. The comma after "Hameed" should be a period.
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Here is what I consider to be a significant improvement: I haven’t received it yet. Please give it to Hameed. I can collect it from him when(ever) he visits my site.
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I agree.
(I was treating it as a memo.)
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I haven't received it yet. Please give it to Hameed. I can collect from him whenever he visits my site.
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