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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please correct the grammar

You deserve to fulfil all your desires. You deserve to aspire only the best. Now you don’t have to stretch your eye-sight far away in the search of your dream home.
It is here at Lotus Park all your dreams in complete reality
  

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You deserve to fulfil all your desires. You deserve to aspire to only the best. Now you don’t have to search far and wide for your dream home.

  • You deserve to fulfil all your desires.
  • You deserve to aspire to only the best.
  • Now you don’t have to search far and wide for your dream home.
  • It is here at Lotus Park that all your dreams come true.
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You deserve to fulfil all your desires. You deserve to aspire to only the best. Now you don’t have to search far and wide for your dream home. It is here at Lotus Park that all your dreams come true.
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Thanks sir can I say

You deserve to aspire to get only the best

or

You deserve to aspire to be only the best
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You can say either; they mean different things.
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I don't think you can really deserve to aspire.
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It seems an odd wish, I admit, but I don't think James Holmes deserved to aspire to be the Joker.
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I have written 'you deserve to aspire' because we are talking to the people who are the most successful in lifer,in this case CEOs, Board of directors & top management.

Thanks

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