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SHD Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct the following sentences

This is to inform you that one of our staff members, Mr. X has made a request of emergency leave as his father now is admitted in the hospital who is in very critical stage. So he requested us to approve a emergency leave as soon as possible.

Under the circumstances, I would ask you to look into the matter and advise me
  

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Hi, This is to inform you that one of our staff members, Mr. X has made a request of emergency leave as his father now is admitted in the hospital who is in very critical stage. So he requested us to approve a emergency leave as soon as possible.

— Clive

  • Hi, This is to inform you that one of our staff members, Mr.
  • X has made a request of emergency leave as his father now is admitted in the hospital who is in very critical stage.
  • So he requested us to approve a emergency leave as soon as possible.
  • Under the circumstances, I would ask you to look into the matter and advise me This is to inform you that one of our staff members, Mr.
  • X, has requested emergency leave as his father has just ben admitted to hospital in critical condition.
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Hi,
This is to inform you that one of our staff members, Mr. X has made a request of emergency leave as his father now is admitted in the hospital who is in very critical stage. So he requested us to approve a emergency leave as soon as possible.

Under the circumstances, I would ask you to look into the matter and advise me

This is to inform you that one of our staff member
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