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As we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team.

Please note that nowadays, the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs. People are struggling to survive with current salary. I humbly request you to kindly revise salary which will help them to support their basic needs in a comfortable way. Hope you understand their situation and will do the needful and oblige.

Rafaelinrio · Accepted Answer

SHDAs we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team.

Please, note that nowadays the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs. People are struggling to survive with current salary. I humbly request you to kindly revise salary which will help them to support their basic needs in a comfortable way. Hope you understand their situation and will do the needful and oblige.

Please, note that nowadays the cost of living is very high and the current salary does not cover basic needs. People have struggled to survive with what they earn currently. Therefore, I humbly request you to kindly analyse the current salary of the maintenance team, and give it a raise if possible, since that that will help them support their basic needs in a comfortable way.
I hope you understand their situation and I look forward to having you do what you can about this matter.

SHD · Answer

Thank you

Scarf teal 2 · Answer

We humbly request you to please arrange the total value of Rs. 57,160/= and oblige us

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