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SHD Posted 17 years ago
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As we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team.

Please note that nowadays, the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs. People are struggling to survive with current salary. I humbly request you to kindly revise salary which will help them to support their basic needs in a comfortable way. Hope you understand their situation and will do the needful and oblige.
  

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SHD As we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team. Please, note that nowadays the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs. People are struggling to survive with current salary.

  • SHD As we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team.
  • Please, note that nowadays the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs.
  • People are struggling to survive with current salary.
  • I humbly request you to kindly revise salary which will help them to support their basic needs in a comfortable way.
  • Hope you understand their situation and will do the needful and oblige.
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SHDAs we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team.

Please, note that nowadays the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs. People are struggling to survive with current salary. I humbly request you to kindly revise salary which will help them to support their basic needs
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We humbly request you to please arrange the total value of Rs. 57,160/= and oblige us

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