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RJD Posted 17 years ago
With reference to the fax received from M/s Xxxxx this morning
We have shown all the damages to the xx's people upon delivery who delivered the items to our stores.We have informed Mr.YY as well as Mr. YX regarding the defects which we noticed, and also we have sent a detail report on the items received from M/s. Xxxxxx to all those concerned on the same day. There after they came back and took three pieces to their stores for rectification and we were informed by Mr.XY that He will rectify all the damaged items and he will arrange to take the next lot when he has finished with the first lot.
This is very ridiculous, by stating the false statement instead of the truth is different, and eveyone knows the
truth clearly.
Grammar
Please correct the following sentences
With reference to the fax received from M/s Xxxxx this morning
We have shown all the damages to the xx's people upon delivery who delivered the items to our stores.We have informed Mr.YY as well as Mr. YX regarding the defects which we noticed, and also we have sent a detail report on the items received from M/s. Xxxxxx to all those concerned on the same day. There after they came back and took three pieces to their stores for rectification and we were informed by Mr.XY that He will rectify all the damaged items and he will arrange to take the next lot when he has finished with the first lot.
This is very ridiculous, by stating the false statement instead of the truth is different, and eveyone knows the
truth clearly.
Top answer
YY as well as Mr. YX regarding the defects which we had noticed, and also we have sent a detailed report on the items received from M/s. *** to all those concerned on the same day.
- YY as well as Mr.
- YX regarding the defects which we had noticed, and also we have sent a detailed report on the items received from M/s.
- *** to all those concerned on the same day.
- XY that He would rectify all the damaged items and he would arrange to take the next lot when he had finished with the first lot.
- This is very ridiculous, by stating the false statement instead of the true one, and eveyone knows the truth clearly.
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We have shown all the damages to the ***'s people upon delivery who delivered the items to our stores.We have informed Mr.YY as well as Mr. YX regarding the defects which we had noticed, and also we have sent a detailed report on the items received from M/s. *** to all those concerned on the same day. Right after they came back and took three pieces to their stores for rectification and we were in
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Hi,
I've tried to improve your grammar, and also to make your paragraph sound more natural.
Clive
This is in reference to the fax we received from Ms *** this morning.
We showed all the damages to the ***'s people who delivered the items to our stores.We informed Mr.YY, as well as Mr. YX, regarding the defects which we noticed, and we also sent a detailed repo
I've tried to improve your grammar, and also to make your paragraph sound more natural.
Clive
This is in reference to the fax we received from Ms *** this morning.
We showed all the damages to the ***'s people who delivered the items to our stores.We informed Mr.YY, as well as Mr. YX, regarding the defects which we noticed, and we also sent a detailed repo
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