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RJD Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct the following sentences


As we have been facing severe problems with XB bank, please cancel the following employees' account in XB bank and open a new account for them in the XD bank.

Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter
  

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We have been facing severe problems with XB bank , so please cancel the following employees' accounts at XB bank and open a new account for each of them at XD bank. Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter .

  • We have been facing severe problems with XB bank , so please cancel the following employees' accounts at XB bank and open a new account for each of them at XD bank.
  • Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter .
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We have been facing severe problems with XB bank, so please cancel the following employees' accounts at XB bank and open a new account for each of them at XD bank.

Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.

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