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Nakash Comfort Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Please correct the following sentence
"Saving 500 Children from Abuse and Exploitation working at Household level and as Laborers in Factories and Brick Kilns of Faisalabad"
Correct it in the sense of grammer.
Correct it in the sense of grammer.
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Hello, Nakash—and welcome to English Forums. First, what is it? Is it a headline?
- Hello, Nakash—and welcome to English Forums.
- First, what is it?
- Is it a headline?
- A unit title?
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Hello, Nakash—and welcome to English Forums.
First, what is it? Is it a headline? A unit title?
First, what is it? Is it a headline? A unit title?
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It it is a title of the project aims to save 500 children working as house servants and as laboreres in Factories and Brick Kilns. Please suggest some title correct in the sense of grammar as well as appealing to the donor to whom this send it going to send.
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If it is the title of a project, then it is far too long, Nakash. Something like this:
Saving Child Laborers in Faisalabad
The other details should appear in your introductory paragraphs.
Saving Child Laborers in Faisalabad
The other details should appear in your introductory paragraphs.
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