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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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Please correct the following paragraph: ...with your very clear approach...

Please edit/correct the following paragraph:

Dear Sir,

I hope you are fine. I don't have words to thank you for your this favour. All I can say is that you are really a very nice person. I have never given you so much trouble if I wasn't in love with your very clear approach to difficult subject like Chemistry. God bless you.

I know I am going to ask you for more than enough. I hope you won't mind. It will be very kind of you, if you could also send me your autograph on a certain paper, which I can get framed and place in my room.

Kind regards,

Jackson
  

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Jackson6612 Please edit/correct the following paragraph : Dear Sir, I hope you are fine. I don't have words to thank you for this favour. All I can say is that you are really a very nice person.

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  • Jackson6612 Please edit/correct the following paragraph : Dear Sir, I hope you are fine.
  • I don't have words to thank you for this favour.
  • All I can say is that you are really a very nice person.
  • I would never have given you so much trouble if I wasn't in love with your very clear approach to a difficult subject like Chemistry.
  • *** bless you.
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Jackson6612Please edit/correct the following paragraph:

Dear Sir,

I hope you are fine. I don't have words to thank you for this favour. All I can say is that you are really a very nice person. I would never have given you so much trouble if I wasn't in love with your very clear approach to a diffi
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The "on a certain paper" is not natural. What type of paper did you mean? I'd like to have anyone's autograph on a $100 bill, but I don't promise to frame it
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Grammar GeekThe "on a certain paper" is not natural. What type of paper did you mean?I'd like to have anyone's autograph on a $100 bill, but I don't promise to frame it
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Jackson, I have to be honest. Asking a teacher for an autograph, with the intention of framing it for your room, sounds rather obsessive. I'm having a hard time thinking how to ask for that without sounding like a stalker.
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Grammar GeekJackson, I have to be honest. Asking a teacher for an autograph, with the intention of framing it for your room, sounds rather obsessive. I'm having a hard time thinking how to ask for that without sounding like a stalker.
Hi GG,

I have checked the meaning of stalker. I would like you to tell me t
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Hi Jackson,

In Western culture, asking a teacher for an autograph would be considered a very strange thing to do. If I were that teacher, I would not feel honoured, but rather quite worried. That's why GG said it would be difficult to ask for one without frightening or embarrassing your teacher.

(Unless he's just won a Nobel Prize, of course
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American English's point of view would be incorrect. A version of English can't have an opinion of its own; it's not an intelligent entity but just a language.
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Nona The BritAmerican English's point of view would be incorrect. A version of English can't have an opinion of its own; it's not an intelligent entity but just a language.
Nona, I got your point. Now there is another problem.

GG wrote:

''Barbara, who gives answers from the American English point of view...''
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