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RJD Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct the following letters

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001 Sub: Personal loan02br
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00Dear Sir,02br
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00This is in reference to the above subject02br
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00One of our staff Mr. X has requested a personal loan in the amount of $ xxxxx.xx for his vacation expenditure02br
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00He is wiling to pay back within in six months from his monthly salary.02br
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00Thanking you in anticipation02br
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002 Sub: Personal loan02br
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00Dear Mr.X,02br
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00As I am planning to go for a vacation, I request you to approve and request the management to02br
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00grant me a personal loan in the amount of $ xxxxx.xx for my vacation expenditure.02br
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00I am willing to pay back within my monthly salary.02br
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00Thank you for your prompt attention to this request02br
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02br 02br 00One of our staff members, Mr. 02br 02br 01i 00(You haven't said what you want the recipient of this letter to do. 02br 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive 0-

— Clive

  • 02br 02br 00One of our staff members, Mr.
  • 02br 02br 01i 00(You haven't said what you want the recipient of this letter to do.
  • 02br 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive 0-
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0Hi,02br
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00This is not a request that would be normal in Canada, but I assume that it is fine in your country.02br
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00I have simply corrected your English.02br
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01b00 02b02br
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001 Subject: Personal loan02br
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00Dear Sir,02br
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00This is in
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