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Fasi Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Please correct the errors. Thanks !

0Please highlight the incorrections and please change if any sentence needed to be more formal. 02br
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00Situation or Question : A Manager(in *** company which provides internet connection) Recieve a letter from his 02br
00customer. 02br
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00To Manager 02br
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00This is *** from *** .I bought an internet connection package from your company 3 months ago.I was desperately waiting 02br
00if any responsible staff member of your company would explain me my package details .My 1st month bill details are 02br
00still unclear and last week my 3rd attempt to contact you for the same pupose is still pending.In all my attempts I always 02br
00been missguided by your in-capable staff .Still all the things are pending. I am regretting to inform you that 02br
00I have no anymore interest to keep continue this contract with *** company. According to rules customers have free hand 02br
00to discontinue their package if they would have faced any in-convinience from the company. But infact this is extreme for me. 02br
00Thank you 02br
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00From 02br
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00*** 02br
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00Answer : 02br
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00Dear Sir ***, 02br
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00As being a manager in *** I am writing you on the behalf of the company On the concern of you recent letter. 02br
00Sir I had better applogize for whatever the inconvinience you have faced from our side. The situation you faced 02br
00is really not neglectable. Sir if I were faced the same situation so I would also be displease and regretibily 02br
00would have taken the same decission. Infact our company recently got few huge contracts to spread it on multinational 02br
00level. Because of busy environment , new planning for new devloping system we are highering more and more 02br
00professionals . If customers find any inconvinience at the moment so *** company would believe it is because of 02br
00suddent changes are coming in our system. On the concern of our customer advisory staff so they 02br
00are capable to persue the queries as this never happend before. 02br
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00Sir in the case I will follow your request now , I have personally request to you that I will persue your case 02br
00this time if you give us one more chance for clearification. 02br
00All the results of you enguires will be in you notice soon. 02br
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00Waiting for your reply. 02br
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00Regards 02br
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00*** 02br
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00Manager 02br
00*** company 0-
  

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0Please viewers I have keen interest to know as this could be very good way for me and people like who use to face these sort of situations to face the situation like this. SO PLEASE DO NOT HESITATE TO REPLY FOR ABOVE THREAD SITUATION 02br 00THANKS 0-

— Fasi

  • 0Please viewers I have keen interest to know as this could be very good way for me and people like who use to face these sort of situations to face the situation like this.
  • SO PLEASE DO NOT HESITATE TO REPLY FOR ABOVE THREAD SITUATION 02br 00THANKS 0-
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0Please viewers I have keen interest to know as this could be very good way for me and people like who use to face these sort of situations to face the situation like this. SO PLEASE DO NOT HESITATE TO REPLY FOR ABOVE THREAD SITUATION 02br
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0One of the reasons that you have received a slow response, Fasi, is that you did not proofread before posting; there are many simple spelling mistakes. The following words and phrases need revision: 02br
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00.I (ALWAYS put two spaces after the period at the end of a sentence before you start the next sentence) 02br
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