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MissLadybird Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct the article I translated
Hi everyone,
One of my students asked me to have a look at the company profile they are going to place on the English version of their site. It is a translation from Russian. I corrected some major grammar mistakes and word order. Still, looking at the text, I feel there are some word choice and sentence structure errors. I can "see" the Russian language behind the English text. Can anyone proof-read it and rephrase some parts?
[company] has been successfully operating on the Russian market for more than 10 years and nowadays it is one of the largest companies in the field of production and construction of water and sewage treatment equipment.
The company creation was preceded by long scientific work on water purification as a whole. The research results also formed scientific basis for the company development.
[company] operates in production and ecological sectors of the market; our activity is aimed at solving problems of drinking and industrial water supply.
Our business is not only water treatment and water purification, but also modernization and improvement of available technologies in this area. Developing our company, we first of all help to prevent health deterioration of the population and improve general ecological situation, and, secondly, we prolong life cycle of industrial equipment.
One of the main missions of the [company] is effective water purification of any category of sewage water. The solution of this task is done by design and introduction of complex automated systems of water purification, which can provide the required water quality standards.
For each given object we select the most effective and economical system of water supply and water disposal. It can be water purification system for a house, a settlement, a city, or even installation for production and industrial purposes.
[company] constantly improves applied technologies of water treatment and water purification.
I would appreciate your help and advice.
One of my students asked me to have a look at the company profile they are going to place on the English version of their site. It is a translation from Russian. I corrected some major grammar mistakes and word order. Still, looking at the text, I feel there are some word choice and sentence structure errors. I can "see" the Russian language behind the English text. Can anyone proof-read it and rephrase some parts?
[company] has been successfully operating on the Russian market for more than 10 years and nowadays it is one of the largest companies in the field of production and construction of water and sewage treatment equipment.
The company creation was preceded by long scientific work on water purification as a whole. The research results also formed scientific basis for the company development.
[company] operates in production and ecological sectors of the market; our activity is aimed at solving problems of drinking and industrial water supply.
Our business is not only water treatment and water purification, but also modernization and improvement of available technologies in this area. Developing our company, we first of all help to prevent health deterioration of the population and improve general ecological situation, and, secondly, we prolong life cycle of industrial equipment.
One of the main missions of the [company] is effective water purification of any category of sewage water. The solution of this task is done by design and introduction of complex automated systems of water purification, which can provide the required water quality standards.
For each given object we select the most effective and economical system of water supply and water disposal. It can be water purification system for a house, a settlement, a city, or even installation for production and industrial purposes.
[company] constantly improves applied technologies of water treatment and water purification.
I would appreciate your help and advice.
Top answer
[company] has been successfully operating in the Russian market for more than 10 years and nowadays it is one of the largest companies in the field of production and construction of water and sewage treatment equipment. The company's creation was preceded by extensive scientific work on water purification as a whole. The research results also formed the scientific basis for the company's development.
- [company] has been successfully operating in the Russian market for more than 10 years and nowadays it is one of the largest companies in the field of production and construction of water and sewage treatment equipment.
- The company's creation was preceded by extensive scientific work on water purification as a whole.
- The research results also formed the scientific basis for the company's development.
- [company] operates in the production and ecological sectors of the market.
- Our activity is aimed at solving problems of drinking and industrial water supply.
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[company] has been successfully operating in the Russian market for more than 10 years and nowadays it is one of the largest companies in the field of production and construction of water and sewage treatment equipment.
The company's creation was preceded by extensive scientific work on water purification as a whole. The research results also formed the scientific basis for the company's
The company's creation was preceded by extensive scientific work on water purification as a whole. The research results also formed the scientific basis for the company's
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