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Son James Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Please correct sentences.


Please check the following sentences are correct in the grammar.

There are four children. One is a boy and the other three children are girls. Tall girls are holding dogs each. Those dogs are connected through a blue dog lead.
Especially since the girl in the very left side on the picture wearing a sky blue pants and plum-coloured T-shirt makes a big smile, I feel happy on watching this picture. I feel the smallest girl looks a younger sister of either the girl in plum-coloured T-shirt or the girl in a white T-shirt with the yellow sunshine shape. As I said in the beginning, there is only a boy wearing a red T-shirt with the shape of yellow flash on this picture. He is just standing, vacantly staring the left side like a robot.

Thank you in advance for your teaching.
  

Top answer

There are four children, a boy and three girls. The two tall girls are holding dogs, who are tied together with a blue leash. The girl on the left, wearing sky-blue pants and a plum-coloured T-shirt, is smiling, so I feel happy looking at this picture.

  • There are four children, a boy and three girls.
  • The two tall girls are holding dogs, who are tied together with a blue leash.
  • The girl on the left, wearing sky-blue pants and a plum-coloured T-shirt, is smiling, so I feel happy looking at this picture.
  • The smallest girl looks like the younger sister of one of the other girls.
  • The boy is wearing a red T-shirt with a yellow lightning bolt on the front.
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There are four children, a boy and three girls. The two tall girls are holding dogs, who are tied together with a blue leash. The girl on the left, wearing sky-blue pants and a plum-coloured T-shirt, is smiling, so I feel happy looking at this picture. The smallest girl looks like the younger sister of one of the other girls. The boy is wearing a red T-shirt with a yellow lightning bolt on the
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Ah! My sentences were perfectly wrong compared to your sentences. Thank you so much for your teaching,Mr.MicawberEmotion: embarrassed.
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Oh! Could I ask you one more? Is it okay that "The two tall girls are holding each dog" in grammar? Thank you in advance for your additional teaching.
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Son James"The two tall girls are holding each dog"
The structure is not wrong, but the word use is odd.
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Thank you for your answer,Mr.MicawberEmotion: embarrassed.

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