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Unprlld Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please correct semantically

If you carefully look at the vastness of the Universe or enormous depths of the ocean with awareness even for a second,
all your sorrows will get dissipated....

because then you will be left with no pride of being someone "great" or "exceptional" !
  

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One of my friends quoted it. I believe the conclusion is not going well with the first paragraph. I mean what's the connection between sorrow and pride.

— Unprlld

  • One of my friends quoted it.
  • I believe the conclusion is not going well with the first paragraph.
  • I mean what's the connection between sorrow and pride.
  • Please, give it a good look.
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One of my friends quoted it. I believe the conclusion is not going well with the first paragraph. I mean what's the connection between sorrow and pride. Please, give it a good look.
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