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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I am going to write about my goal. My goal for the second semester is to lose weight. I noticed that my body got fatter than before. Looking in the mirror the other day, I saw a pig staring at me. So far I have tried lots of things to lose weight, but nothing has worked. I think it’s because I was not determined. From now on, the girl who used to be weak-willed will turn into the girl of strong will. I have two plans. First, I will get up 30 minutes earlier and do exercise for 30 minutes, such as jogging, yoga, jumping rope. After that, I will be sure to have breakfast. It will not only be good for my health but will help me to concentrate on the lesson. Second, I will never eat snacks and chew food for a long time. Experts say chewing food is good for diet. I wish my extra fat were removed from my body.
  

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I am going to write about my goal. My goal for the second semester is to lose weight. I noticed that my body has got / gotten fatter than before.

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  • I am going to write about my goal.
  • My goal for the second semester is to lose weight.
  • I noticed that my body has got / gotten fatter than before.
  • Looking in the mirror the other day, I saw a pig staring at me.
  • So far I have tried lots of things to lose weight, but nothing has worked.
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I am going to write about my goal. My goal for the second semester is to lose weight. I noticed that my body has got / gotten fatter than before. Looking in the mirror the other day, I saw a pig staring at me. So far I have tried lots of things to lose weight, but nothing has worked. I think it’s because I was not determined enough. From now on, the girl who used to be weak-willed wi
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i wish my extra fat were removed from my body

is this sentence gramatically wrong?
it was marked as worng sentence
the teacher said "were" should be replaced with "was"

i agree it sounds a little awkward
but, is it completely incorrect?
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Anonymousbut, is it completely incorrect?
It is grammatically correct, but awkward.
It implies an operation such as liposuction, though.
Doctors remove fat through a needle.
Anonymousthe teacher said "were" should be replaced with "was"
"Were" is correct. The subjunctive mood comes after verbs such as "wish".
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