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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
please correct paragraph
Please correct paragraph grammar mistakes or sentencing.
They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They got in New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…and went to leave behind an amazing Central Park covered in snow. It was sunny today, what a luck! In Central Park, everybody was skiing (really!), riding on sleds… It felt like a holiday!
We crossed the Brooklyn Bridge right after that to take a few more [pictures] with the skyline of Manhattan in the background. There was almost no one there, the snow was blown away by the wind on the top of the buildings.
Thank you in advance
They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They got in New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…and went to leave behind an amazing Central Park covered in snow. It was sunny today, what a luck! In Central Park, everybody was skiing (really!), riding on sleds… It felt like a holiday!
We crossed the Brooklyn Bridge right after that to take a few more [pictures] with the skyline of Manhattan in the background. There was almost no one there, the snow was blown away by the wind on the top of the buildings.
Thank you in advance
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They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They got in to New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…( I'm not sure about the ellipsis here, the second sentence cannot stand alone.
- They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session.
- They got in to New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be under a gray cloudy sky.
- But then, the blizzard came…( I'm not sure about the ellipsis here, the second sentence cannot stand alone.
- You could say " ...
- the blizzard came and went to leave behind an amazing...
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They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They got into New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…(I'm not sure about the ellipsis here, the second sentence cannot stand alone. You could say
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