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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Please correct paragraph.
Sorry for the late reply but Ive been swamped with work recently. First and foremost, It was a pleasure meeting you! We had a very efficient discussion followed by a wonderful tour of your factory! Leo and Tina were very helpful, creatively thinking on how we should proceed with the bracket design during their luxy visit. Of course three heads is definitely better than one(mine)!! Once again, very nice meeting y'all and we'll see each soon in the near future. Thank you.
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Hi, Here's what I suggest. Sorry for the late reply, but Ive been swamped with work recently. First and foremost, it was a pleasure meeting you!
- Hi, Here's what I suggest.
- Sorry for the late reply, but Ive been swamped with work recently.
- First and foremost, it was a pleasure meeting you!
- We had a very useful discussion followed by a wonderful tour of your factory!
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Hi,
Here's what I suggest.
Sorry for the late reply, but Ive been swamped with work recently. First and foremost, it was a pleasure meeting you! We had a very useful discussion followed by a wonderful tour of your factory! Leo and Tina were very helpful, creatively thinking about how we should proceed with the bracket design during their next (???) visit. Of course, three heads
Here's what I suggest.
Sorry for the late reply, but Ive been swamped with work recently. First and foremost, it was a pleasure meeting you! We had a very useful discussion followed by a wonderful tour of your factory! Leo and Tina were very helpful, creatively thinking about how we should proceed with the bracket design during their next (???) visit. Of course, three heads
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I will also add that it is far too casual for business correspondence unless you are a very close friend of the recipient. In any other case, it will seem facetious.
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Hello,
Can someone please correct it, so that it's more professional? Thank you.
Can someone please correct it, so that it's more professional? Thank you.
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Clive has already given you a number of suggestions, and I have added my comment. Now how about putting some thought into it and trying to improve it yourself first? If it is business correspondence, be less casual.
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