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Stellayau Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Please correct one more grammar for me, Thanks !
Noted the additional new production line was ready and will being production on Oct 16. The maximum production will be increased to 3000pcs. Please confirm the Oct's schedule to us ASAP
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Hi, This is how I will fix it: Please note that an/a (additional) new production line is ready (to roll) and scheduled to begin its production on October 16. The (our) maximum production will be increased to 3000pcs. Please confirm the October's schedule ASAP.
- Hi, This is how I will fix it: Please note that an/a (additional) new production line is ready (to roll) and scheduled to begin its production on October 16.
- The (our) maximum production will be increased to 3000pcs.
- Please confirm the October's schedule ASAP.
- The ones in parentheses are optional, I think.
- You can choose to use them or choose not to, I think.
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Hi,
This is how I will fix it:
Please note that an/a (additional) new production line is ready (to roll) and scheduled to begin its production on October 16. The (our) maximum production will be increased to 3000pcs. Please confirm the October's schedule ASAP.
The ones in parentheses are optional, I think. You can choose to use them or choose not to, I think.
This is how I will fix it:
Please note that an/a (additional) new production line is ready (to roll) and scheduled to begin its production on October 16. The (our) maximum production will be increased to 3000pcs. Please confirm the October's schedule ASAP.
The ones in parentheses are optional, I think. You can choose to use them or choose not to, I think.
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