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Can we believe a fortune or a destiny of future in our life?

We might find an answer in venerable Buddhist monk's sayings.
To conclude, whether you believe it or not, it is your choice and freedom.If you feel it is real, It would be real. In the case, You'd better believe it.
If you don't feel it is real,you'd not better believe it. What I want to tell you is because all of the facts can be changed by how you see it with which view.
For example,
A blind touches a leg of an elephant, and you ask him what it looks like, if he answers it is a pillar. I mean, The fact to him is that it looks a pillar. Even though you explain him why it is a leg of an elephant so many time again and again, he couldn't recognize why it is a leg. Because he can't see it. It is his limitation.
Here is another example.
A mother believes her son is not smart. So she decides that she wouldn't send her son to University. ( Depending on culture of each country, some parents can support their children' school expenses even to university. In my country, it is normal for parents to support tuition fee of their sons and daughters for university.) But she didn't even know how anxious her son wants to go to university.
In it result, there can be a very big possibility that her son wouldn't go to University.
Let me see another mother's case.
Another mother thinks even though everybody knowing her son thinks her son is not so smart to go to University. Even like that, she is trying to send her son to University.
Why? She answers she believes anyone have enough ability to understand all of the study courses in even university, regardless whether he is smart or not.
Furthermore, she values it a very big factor that this society she is living requires for young men to graduate university in order to get a better salary. So now that she thinks if her son can study hard, he can definitely go to University like other students. How would he be like later? I don't know it but I think there is a bigger possibility to go to university compared to the former mother's son.
Like this, as much as she believes and feels, it limits her actions and efforts. Therefore, Judging from these 2 cases, we would say a strong influence from our thought and even feeling limit our behaviors and efforts on our goal.

Considering our appreciation on teller's story on our future,
I know you have had smoke more than 10 years. Then I bet you had smoke yesterday and the day before. But I'm not sure whether you would have smoke 1 year later or not. Because Who know you can quit smoking 6 months later.
We can easily guess what kind of life he had gotten valuing what you are. but for future, it is not easy. Yes! Making a real estimation on our present figures and efforts, sometimes we can guess what he would be like 1 year later. But everybody know there is a uncertainty in our future.
To be short, Our present efforts and figures would result inevitable consequence in our future but sometimes can bring a little different consequence against the expected result under the fact that we don't know its possibility. This way is a theory the fortune- teller often used. You had better remember this fact.
Due to this uncertainty in our future, we often want to go to the fortune-tellers to make a uncertainty into a possibility.
It is okay to go there in order to remove your anxiety. But you have to always keep it in your mind that there is a uncertainty in our future. You don't need to 100% believe their words.