Please correct my writing, thank you!

Describe an ideal home that you would like to live in

you should say:

1. where it would be

2. what type of home it would be

3. who you would like to live with

4. explain why you would like to live in this place

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If I had to talk about my ideal house, it would have to be a detached beautiful house by the seaside in my hometown, Danang city.

Honestly, I am really into the minimalist house design so I would like to live in a house that is neither too big nor too small, enough for a small family to live cozily together. It would have a modern architecture feature, equipped with basic smart appliances, lights, and other types of furniture that are arranged in a sophisticated way, as well as match perfectly with the wall, is painted blue and deep yellow, which is my favorite color. It’s cool just to think about it.

I am a nature lover so I will opt for a house having an open balcony where my whole family can enjoy the peaceful and breathtaking of the sea and chat over a reunion meeting at the weekends. And I will also plant a small garden up there to make my house looks more environmentally friendly.

I have been dreaming about a house like that when I was a child. A fresh environment like that will not only helps me destress pretty well after long hours of working.

But also a cozy atmosphere for my family members. Of course, this house will cost me an arm and a leg since nowadays, the price of property has gone up dramatically, but I suppose it’s totally worth wide.