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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Please correct my writing.

I'm going to stop using the Facebook social network. It is true that there are some advantages. But, it consumes my valuable time much. I have to do more important things in life than Facebook.
Please correct my writing. Thanks in advance.
  

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Anonymous I'm going to stop using the Facebook social network. It is true that there are some advantages. But, it consumes my valuable time much.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous I'm going to stop using the Facebook social network.
  • It is true that there are some advantages.
  • But, it consumes my valuable time much.
  • I have to do more important things in life than Facebook.
  • Your sentences are understandable, but they need a few improvements.
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AnonymousI'm going to stop using the Facebook social network. It is true that there are some advantages. But, it consumes my valuable time much. I have to do more important things in life than Facebook.
Your sentences are understandable, but they need a few improvements.

I'm going to stop using Facebook. It is true that it has some advantages, but it
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