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I'm a college student from Taiwan and I major in English, I have a class which called Journalism Reading and Writing. And my professor gave me an assignment: write a piece of news! It's quite hard for me cuz writing news are so different than normal article! I'm afraid I would make a lot of grammer mistakes because my professor is a very serious man. I hope you can help me to correct my article, thanks a lot!!

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Education reform forces bushiban changing their manage style after a series policy put into operation. Cram school in Taipei is pounded especially seriously because 90 percentages of students go there after school. Varied edition of textbook produces windstorm around every profession.
One policy of education reform is that school can chose different edition of textbook by their principle. “We don’t know the standard of choosing which edition, the decisions were decided by manage apartment of school, however, each edition has different part indeed, and students can’t link up completely what they’ve learned in last semester if school uses another edition. Teachers don’t have method to solve student’s problem. As a result, students must go to bushiban because it’s the only place could clear up students’ question after school,” said Mei Lin, a teacher of Jing-Wen senior high school.
In Taipei, one bushiban has students from over two schools. Students’ needs are changing, bushiban can’t avoid following government’s step. Chan Yi, a famous teacher who uses his name as the bushiban’s name and owns around 3,000 high school students stated that large-scale cram school can handle the difference of editions; therefore, they have many teachers to inspect and put those dissimilitudes in order. And help students comparing all the differences between varied editions. Hence, small-scale cram school would easily be eliminated.
He also said that education reform has become a major point of political contention and education policy; unfortunately, the overwhelming response is that these reforms are not working and inappropriate.
Bushiban for elementary school has different situation because they don’t have to learn all the editions. However, it’s also a problem if students from different school using different editions. “Teachers all feel worry about this policy because they have to prepare every edition. Especially when school change into another edition between two semester, students sometimes can’t link up and teacher have to spend more time in explaining the difference,” said Mei-shung Lin, a manager of Rebecca cram school who devotes 18 years in administering her bushiban. She also declares that most cram school for elementary would gradually only accept students from the same school. As a result, the competition would become seriously between the same trades in the same area.
The principal of Jing-Wen high school mentioned that ninety percent of teachers are having trouble keeping up with the times and having trouble teaching the new material. They argued that the main reason they were having difficulties in that the education ministry’s policy flip-flops have left them confused.
“I believe government’s policy of letting private publisher editing textbook is goodwill at first, varied editions diversify studying indeed. However, Department of Education does not check every edition in-depth. Even though, they don’t response our question. If this situation goes on, the quality of students will develop in various ways because some visions are easier and some are hard,” stated by Shui-bin Hu, the principal of Jing-Wen high school.
“Students study the same edition before education reform may feel bored about the dull contents but they can study hard to handle their grade, at present, the textbooks are colorful and lively but compare with the former edition, students have to learn more things and the pressure is also increasing,” he said yesterday.