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Egarl Posted 17 years ago
Kite Runner:
Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 and the story passed in 1988 about wealthy guy from Iran and his son in Afghanistan. Dad always complained about his son because, when he was in trouble, he has never fought back although their friends were teasing. The son has a friend name is Hasan, hasan and his father are working in wealthy family’s house.
Somehow wealthy man and his friend were reading the newspaper, they saw news in the newspaper and written that ‘The brawl has occurred in the court sovereignty area of Soviet Union’. Wealthy man didn’t like from SSCB and he swore that if I knew guy from Russia, I would chew him up.
He complained about his son because, and wealthy man said I was always strong always powerful why my son wasn’t as strong as me. Why?
When All of this conversation were speaking in the living room, Ahmet was in the stair and listened all of them. He felt so sad himself and got rid of from Hassan.
And that day Ahmet’s Birthday, so many visitors in their house. Fireworks were sending to air and everybody were watching them, Visitors gave Ahmet their present, good clothes, pants, shirts, watch. Everybody spent very good night at that day.
Next day after the birthday Ahmet started to think about how can I managed to get them out from our house. Suddenly one opinion occurred his mind. He took his watch and put it above the Hassan’s bed and after this process he went to his father and said that I can’t find out my watch anywhere. His father said that please look for it, maybe you left it in somewhere. Ahmet turned around house and came to his father and said that ‘I haven’t been able to find it out’. Dad took this event seriously, after a couple of times he found it in the Hassan’s room. He felt so disappointed and ordered his another assistants to send for Hassan’s family. Hassan and father came up there and waited in front of their owners.
Rich people asked ‘Had you stolen this watch?’
At first Hassan looked to Ahmet and said ‘Yes’
Owner hadn’t asked any more questions and only said that I forgive you.
They answered that we decided to go and resigned from job.
Owner said again loudly ‘I said Forgive you’
They answered that you weren’t my owner we were leaving’
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Kite Runner:
Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 and the story passed in 1988 about wealthy guy from Iran and his son in Afghanistan. Dad always complained about his son because, when he was in trouble, he has never fought back although their friends were teasing. The son has a friend name is Hasan, hasan and his father are working in wealthy family’s house.
Somehow wealthy man and his friend were reading the newspaper, they saw news in the newspaper and written that ‘The brawl has occurred in the court sovereignty area of Soviet Union’. Wealthy man didn’t like from SSCB and he swore that if I knew guy from Russia, I would chew him up.
He complained about his son because, and wealthy man said I was always strong always powerful why my son wasn’t as strong as me. Why?
When All of this conversation were speaking in the living room, Ahmet was in the stair and listened all of them. He felt so sad himself and got rid of from Hassan.
And that day Ahmet’s Birthday, so many visitors in their house. Fireworks were sending to air and everybody were watching them, Visitors gave Ahmet their present, good clothes, pants, shirts, watch. Everybody spent very good night at that day.
Next day after the birthday Ahmet started to think about how can I managed to get them out from our house. Suddenly one opinion occurred his mind. He took his watch and put it above the Hassan’s bed and after this process he went to his father and said that I can’t find out my watch anywhere. His father said that please look for it, maybe you left it in somewhere. Ahmet turned around house and came to his father and said that ‘I haven’t been able to find it out’. Dad took this event seriously, after a couple of times he found it in the Hassan’s room. He felt so disappointed and ordered his another assistants to send for Hassan’s family. Hassan and father came up there and waited in front of their owners.
Rich people asked ‘Had you stolen this watch?’
At first Hassan looked to Ahmet and said ‘Yes’
Owner hadn’t asked any more questions and only said that I forgive you.
They answered that we decided to go and resigned from job.
Owner said again loudly ‘I said Forgive you’
They answered that you weren’t my owner we were leaving’
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Egarl: There are many problems with the English in the essay you have written. If you want more responses from the forum members, just post and work on a few sentences at one time. The Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 (either say "the 1980's" - sometime in the 10 years 1980-1989 or "in 1980" - one year).
- Egarl: There are many problems with the English in the essay you have written.
- If you want more responses from the forum members, just post and work on a few sentences at one time.
- The Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 (either say "the 1980's" - sometime in the 10 years 1980-1989 or "in 1980" - one year).
- and T he story passed took place in 1988.
- It was about a wealthy guy from Iran and his son in Afghanistan.
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Egarl:
There are many problems with the English in the essay you have written. If you want more responses from the forum members, just post and work on a few sentences at one time.
The Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 (either say "the 1980's" - sometime in the 10 years 1980-1989 or "in 1980" - one year).and The story passed t
There are many problems with the English in the essay you have written. If you want more responses from the forum members, just post and work on a few sentences at one time.
The Kite Runner movie has been filmed in the 1980 (either say "the 1980's" - sometime in the 10 years 1980-1989 or "in 1980" - one year).
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