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Jackwild Posted 9 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

Please correct my translation lyrics

l try to translate the song in my own language to in English

l want the lyrics more natural and poemy

Please correct the lyrics below



Staying beside me while I build a fire
Try some marshmallow

How sweet you are baby

Yeah I’m hoping that it would be forever

Though I can see that you want to cry

The Sun goes down soon
Why don’t we have a race to find a shooting star
How sweet you are baby
Yeah I’m dreaming that it would be forever
Though I’m telling you that I won’t leave you

Tonight I want to see nothing else but you
You’ll see
Tonight you cannot see nobody else but me

You’ll see

  

Top answer

jackwild l want the lyrics more natural and poetic . Please correct the lyrics below It is difficult—or impossible—to do so without hearing the melody, but: Sitting beside me while I build a fire Try some marshmallows. How sweet you are , baby.

  • jackwild l want the lyrics more natural and poetic .
  • Please correct the lyrics below It is difficult—or impossible—to do so without hearing the melody, but: Sitting beside me while I build a fire Try some marshmallows.
  • How sweet you are , baby.
  • Yeah , I’m hoping it will be forever, Though I can see that you want to cry.
  • The sun's going down soon.
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jackwildl want the lyrics more natural and poetic. Please correct the lyrics below

It is difficult—or impossible—to do so without hearing the melody, but:


Sitting beside me while I build a fire
Try some marshmallows.

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