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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
PLEASE CORRECT MY TEXT,IT NEEDS TO BE BRITISH ENGLISH PLEASE
"You are stating that Amy is your fiancee,I must correct you,Amy was your fiancee,she is moving on,she is trying to forget you,she will not put her life on hold because of you.
You will not help her with her Lawyer fees,because I will take care of it,at this point,you are out of the picture.
Your defense of putting Amy in jail in order to stop her "pattern of violence" is weak,I repeat...no real man would do that to a loved one.
Amy is not violent,your needy family and you were the trigger for her behaviour,therefore,you must stay away from her.
Amy cannot apply for a job or leave Ontario,and she must report to her Probation Officer every week,you have done this to her,no excuses.
Oh yes,I forgot an insignificant detail:Amy will have a criminal record for the rest of her life,in many countries they will deny her entry.
There is not need of getting excited about my comments on your minger wife,and the fact that you cannot afford a new car,I am only stating the truth.
About my face,why I thank you,at least you seem to posses an eye for beauty,if nothing else.
I will prefer if you do not write me anymore,it is a waist of my valuable time."
You will not help her with her Lawyer fees,because I will take care of it,at this point,you are out of the picture.
Your defense of putting Amy in jail in order to stop her "pattern of violence" is weak,I repeat...no real man would do that to a loved one.
Amy is not violent,your needy family and you were the trigger for her behaviour,therefore,you must stay away from her.
Amy cannot apply for a job or leave Ontario,and she must report to her Probation Officer every week,you have done this to her,no excuses.
Oh yes,I forgot an insignificant detail:Amy will have a criminal record for the rest of her life,in many countries they will deny her entry.
There is not need of getting excited about my comments on your minger wife,and the fact that you cannot afford a new car,I am only stating the truth.
About my face,why I thank you,at least you seem to posses an eye for beauty,if nothing else.
I will prefer if you do not write me anymore,it is a waist of my valuable time."
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Anonymous "You are stating that Amy is your fianc ee. I must correct yo u. A my was your fiancee .
- Anonymous "You are stating that Amy is your fianc ee.
- I must correct yo u.
- A my was your fiancee .
- Sh e is moving on, she is trying to forget yo u.
- Sh e will not put her life on hold because of you.
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Anonymous"You are stating that Amy is your fiancee. I must correct you. Amy was your fiancee. She is moving on,she istrying to forget you. She will not put her life on hold because of you.
You will not help
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Thanks so much,I am trying to write a short novel here.
Could you please correct this for me??
I will be so grateful!!
Very well Sam.
From what I gathered,I now believe that you have been living a double life like Carl said,but I also learned that you have done it in order to get your divorce faster.
You have to take every ****** demand
Could you please correct this for me??
I will be so grateful!!
Very well Sam.
From what I gathered,I now believe that you have been living a double life like Carl said,but I also learned that you have done it in order to get your divorce faster.
You have to take every ****** demand
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