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Please correct my text below:
The story of an eraser and a pencil.
Pencil: I'm sorry.
Eraser: What's that for, dear? You didn't do anything wrong, did you?
Pencil: Oh yes I did, you've suffered a pain only because of me. Whenever I make a mistake, you are always with me to help me correct it. But when you do that, you hurt yourself. Every time like that, you are smaller and weaker.
Eraser: That's right! But honey, never mind! You know, I was created to do this. I was created to help you whenever you make mistakes. Though I know I will disappear someday and you will have another mother, I'm still happy with what I did for you. Thus, don't worry, dear! I don't like seeing you when you're sad.
Pencil: I'm sorry.
Eraser: What's that for, dear? You didn't do anything wrong, did you?
Pencil: Oh yes I did, you've suffered a pain only because of me. Whenever I make a mistake, you are always with me to help me correct it. But when you do that, you hurt yourself. Every time like that, you are smaller and weaker.
Eraser: That's right! But honey, never mind! You know, I was created to do this. I was created to help you whenever you make mistakes. Though I know I will disappear someday and you will have another mother, I'm still happy with what I did for you. Thus, don't worry, dear! I don't like seeing you when you're sad.
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The story of an eraser and a pencil. Pencil: I'm sorry. Eraser: What's that for, dear?
- The story of an eraser and a pencil.
- Pencil: I'm sorry.
- Eraser: What's that for, dear?
- You didn't do anything wrong, did you?
- Pencil: Oh yes I did, you've suffered a pain only because of me.
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The story of an eraser and a pencil.
Pencil: I'm sorry.
Eraser: What's that for, dear? You didn't do anything wrong, did you?
Pencil: Oh yes I did, you've suffereda pain only because of me. Whenever I make a mistake, you are always with me to help me correct it. But when you do that, you hurt yourself. Every time like that
Pencil: I'm sorry.
Eraser: What's that for, dear? You didn't do anything wrong, did you?
Pencil: Oh yes I did, you've suffered
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Blue Jay Though I know I will disappear someday and you will have another mother (I'm not sure what you mean here) I'm still happy with what I did for you.Eraser is a mother. Pencil is her daughter.
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OK, now I get it. You have written a nice little story. I enjoyed reading it.
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Blue Jay OK, now I get it. You have written a nice little story. I enjoyed reading it.Oh, really? Thank you. But I did not write it. I just translated it from Vietnamese into English.
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