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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Thank you for the price.
According our conversation by phone, we would like to ship this order in containers, not in drums.

Could you please see if it is possible?
  

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I assume that you are the vendor, and you are writing an email to your customer. You say that it is preferable for you to ship the order in containers, you are asking the customer if it is OK for them to receive the order packed in containers instead of drums. Thank you for agreeing to the price.

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  • I assume that you are the vendor, and you are writing an email to your customer.
  • You say that it is preferable for you to ship the order in containers, you are asking the customer if it is OK for them to receive the order packed in containers instead of drums.
  • Thank you for agreeing to the price.
  • According to our recent phone conversation by phone , we would like to ship this order in containers, not in drums.
  • Could you please confirm that this is acceptable see if it is possible ?
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I assume that you are the vendor, and you are writing an email to your customer. You say that it is preferable for you to ship the order in containers, you are asking the customer if it is OK for them to receive the order packed in containers instead of drums.
Thank you for agreein
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I am the customer , I go with second one.

Thank you
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