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Tomer Posted 19 years ago
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Our dream project is to built the biggest hotel in Los Angeles.
We will call it Tokyo hotel. The theme of the hotel is Japan of course.
We’ve started to built the hotel in 2007 and it will be finished in late 2010.
The hotel will have an estimated 5000 bedrooms. All the bedrooms are suites.
The regular suites costs $1000 per night and increases to over $15,000 per night and the royal suites cost $30,000.
The suites contains a 50 inch lcd television with a playstation 3 and 10 videogames, a king-size bed, a Jacuzzi for 5 persons a free of charge mini bar and for the men there will be a golden pole for the strippers. Every evening you can choose from 1000 strippers from our catalog. Los Angeles is a big city so if you want to explore the city you will need a car. We will have more than 500 cars in our possession.
We also want to built the biggest movie theatre in the world for 500 persons.
Outside the hotel there will be 5 tennis courts, 5 basketball courts, a massive swimming pool with glides and 18 holes golf course.
From the underground tunnel you can go to the private beach.
We will have 6 restaurants:
1. Neptorne’s: there you can eat all kinds of fish and sea fruits.
2. Grill house: there you can eat all kind of grilled meat .
3. Red dragon: there you can eat typical Chinese food like eggrolls, bami…
4. Samurai: there you can eat typical Japanese food like sushi
5. Pizzeria: there you can eat pizzas, lasagnas, spiced bread , pastas…
6. Viva Mexico: there you can eat very hot food.
There will be 2 strip clubs: one for the men and one for the women.
For the money spenders there will be a casino.
Every evening at 10 pm there will be a live concert from a famous singer.
The project will cost us an estimated 2 billion dollars.
Thank you
Our dream project is to built the biggest hotel in Los Angeles.
We will call it Tokyo hotel. The theme of the hotel is Japan of course.
We’ve started to built the hotel in 2007 and it will be finished in late 2010.
The hotel will have an estimated 5000 bedrooms. All the bedrooms are suites.
The regular suites costs $1000 per night and increases to over $15,000 per night and the royal suites cost $30,000.
The suites contains a 50 inch lcd television with a playstation 3 and 10 videogames, a king-size bed, a Jacuzzi for 5 persons a free of charge mini bar and for the men there will be a golden pole for the strippers. Every evening you can choose from 1000 strippers from our catalog. Los Angeles is a big city so if you want to explore the city you will need a car. We will have more than 500 cars in our possession.
We also want to built the biggest movie theatre in the world for 500 persons.
Outside the hotel there will be 5 tennis courts, 5 basketball courts, a massive swimming pool with glides and 18 holes golf course.
From the underground tunnel you can go to the private beach.
We will have 6 restaurants:
1. Neptorne’s: there you can eat all kinds of fish and sea fruits.
2. Grill house: there you can eat all kind of grilled meat .
3. Red dragon: there you can eat typical Chinese food like eggrolls, bami…
4. Samurai: there you can eat typical Japanese food like sushi
5. Pizzeria: there you can eat pizzas, lasagnas, spiced bread , pastas…
6. Viva Mexico: there you can eat very hot food.
There will be 2 strip clubs: one for the men and one for the women.
For the money spenders there will be a casino.
Every evening at 10 pm there will be a live concert from a famous singer.
The project will cost us an estimated 2 billion dollars.
Thank you
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Our dream project is to built the biggest hotel in Los Angeles. We will call it Tokyo hotel. The theme of the hotel is Japan ese, of course.
- Our dream project is to built the biggest hotel in Los Angeles.
- We will call it Tokyo hotel.
- The theme of the hotel is Japan ese, of course.
- We ’ve started to built [We will start to build OR we've started building] the hotel in 2007 and it will be finished in late 2010.
- The hotel will have an estimated 5000 bedrooms.
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Our dream project is to built the biggest hotel in Los Angeles.
We will call it Tokyo hotel. The theme of the hotel is Japanese, of course.
We’ve started to built [We will start to build OR we've started building] the hotel in 2007 and it will be finished in late 2010.
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We will call it Tokyo hotel. The theme of the hotel is Japanese, of course.
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