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Le Minh Quang Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct my task 1. I'm quite confused with this one.

This task with 3 different categories and years was confusing as I don't know the fitting way to describe it.

The graph shows the percentage of people living in the UK who ate the required amount of vegetables and fruit in the year 2002, 2006, and 2010.

Overall, women took the first place in consuming the appropriate amount of green in all the stated years, men held the second spot, and children were the segment that had the lowest percentage of intaking the suitable fruit and vegetable proportion.

In 2002, women took the first ranking among the three with a quarter of them having the needed amount of green. Men were right behind with 3% less than that of women. Children, however, took the last place with just over one-tenth (11%) of them.

Although there had been improvement in the ratio, the same ranking still applied to the remaining 2 years. Women still remained the first position with 32% in 2006 and 26% in 2010. The figures of men and children also experienced the same hyperbolic trend with the increases of 4% and 7% in the year 2006 and a decrease of 2% for both categories in 2010, respectively.

  

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