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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Please correct my short letter
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00 Date: 07 01 sup 00 th 02 sup 00 April, 2008 00 Ref : KCW/101/2008 00 Al Salem Establishment 00 Safat, 32035. 00 Shuwaikh. 00 Attention 00 00 : 00 00 01 b 00 Mr. Mohammad Amin 02 b 00 00 Human Resources Manager 00 Dear Mr. Amin 01 b 01 u 00 SUPPLY OF MANPOWER PERSONNEL’S REVISED RATES 02 u 02 b 00 Further to your letter dated 23 01 sup 00 rd 02 sup 00 March 2008, we would like to bring your notice that the Rates quoted for supply of candidates for Engineer category are very low while we do the survey in the market. 00 Therefore could you please send us the revised increased rates for the Engineer category in order supply personnel’s on time. 00 Yours sincerely, 00 Hussain Yatim 00 Deputy General Manager 0-
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00 Date: 07 01 sup 00 th 02 sup 00 April, 2008 00 Ref : KCW/101/2008 00 Al Salem Establishment 00 Safat, 32035. 00 Shuwaikh. 00 Attention 00 00 : 00 00 01 b 00 Mr. Mohammad Amin 02 b 00 00 Human Resources Manager 00 Dear Mr. Amin 01 b 01 u 00 SUPPLY OF MANPOWER PERSONNEL’S REVISED RATES 02 u 02 b 00 Further to your letter dated 23 01 sup 00 rd 02 sup 00 March 2008, we would like to bring your notice that the Rates quoted for supply of candidates for Engineer category are very low while we do the survey in the market. 00 Therefore could you please send us the revised increased rates for the Engineer category in order supply personnel’s on time. 00 Yours sincerely, 00 Hussain Yatim 00 Deputy General Manager 0-
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0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 11 b 11 i 10 could please correct this letter or draft in better way pls 12 i 12 b 12 br 12 br 10 Date: 07 11 sup 10 th 12 sup 10 April, 2008 12 br 10 Ref : KCW/101/2008 10 10 Al Salem Establishment 10 Safat, 32035. 12 br 12 br 10 Attention: 10 10 11 b 10 Mr. Mohammad Amin 12 b 10 , 10 Human Resources Manager 12 br 12 br 10 Dear Mr.
- 0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 11 b 11 i 10 could please correct this letter or draft in better way pls 12 i 12 b 12 br 12 br 10 Date: 07 11 sup 10 th 12 sup 10 April, 2008 12 br 10 Ref : KCW/101/2008 10 10 Al Salem Establishment 10 Safat, 32035.
- 12 br 12 br 10 Attention: 10 10 11 b 10 Mr.
- Mohammad Amin 12 b 10 , 10 Human Resources Manager 12 br 12 br 10 Dear Mr.
- 12 br 12 br 10 Yours sincerely, 12 br 12 br 12 br 10 Hussain Yatim 12 br 10 Deputy General Manager 12 br 12 br 12 blockquote 10 This seems odd.
- Who is charging whom?
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01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 11 b 11 i 10 could please correct this letter or draft in better way pls 12 i 12 b 12 br
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10 Date: 07 11 sup 10 th 12 sup 10 April, 2008 12 br
10 Ref : KCW/101/2008 10 10 Al Salem Establishment 10 Safat, 32035. 10 Shuwaikh. 12 br
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