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When you download a hot film from Internet, I am sure that you are very interested in it. But, have you ever thought that you had done a crime? Even in the movie industry’s opinion, people who download and distribute copyrighted material - same you did - should go to jail. Although I suppose the movie industry’s decision is so strict but it should be done.

If loading or sharing films or materials from Internet is only unintentional and does not aim at business, charge above may be quite severe. Thank to Internet, information and materials were known more generously. You can not deny that copying and sharing film from Internet created success of celebrated people. Almost of people cannot afford to own legally all of things that they want such as a film, a song or material. So Internet will not help them be well-known as it is being if the law does not allow them to do that.

But it is not fair with inventor. To create a film, a song or material, many people did work hard so much. That is their sweet, tear and blood. Besides making their work and themselves become famous over the world, downloading and distributing copyrighted material in Internet also take trouble about finance into over them.

According to Agency France Press, although many people believe that the film industry makes enormous profits, almost half of all films do not earn enough money to pay back their inventors. If people continue to download movies off the Internet instead of paying to see them, the movie industry will have trouble surviving. It is right with all of intellectual property.

With the reasons above, I think every country need to create treats and conventions to guarantee for inventor’s economic interest, beside let their invention useful for everyone.