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Rhiamon Zhang Posted 12 years ago
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Please correct my sentences! Thanks!
Sometimes I wonder, life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never meet you, then what is the point to live in the easiest life! It's you make me feel complete, it's you make me feel alive. Even knowing you may not be able to hold my hand to the end, met you in some point of my life is the most luxurious happiness have ever happen to me.
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Hello, Rhiamon—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Try to correct them and then post your revised text here for review.
- Hello, Rhiamon—and welcome to English Forums.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Try to correct them and then post your revised text here for review.
- Sometimes I won der, lif e would have been much easier if I had chosen another path.
- But if that means I would never meet you, then what is the point to live in the easiest life!
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Hello, Rhiamon—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Try to correct them and then post your revised text here for review.
Sometimes I wonder, life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never meet you, then what is the point to live in the easiest life! It's you make me feel c
Sometimes I wonder, life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never meet you, then what is the point to live in the easiest life! It's you make me feel c
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Thank you very much Micowber, I tried to correct them but I wasn't so sure about them, please take a look and provide me some hints with the mistakes I made, below is my revised content:
Sometimes I wonder that life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never met you, then what is the point to live the easiest life! It's you
Sometimes I wonder that life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never met you, then what is the point to live the easiest life! It's you
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Better, Rhiamon. Here are a few more corrections:
Sometimes I wonder whether life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never have met you, then what is the point to living the easiest life? It's you who make me feel complete, and it's you who make me feel alive. Even knowing you may not be able to hold my
Sometimes I wonder whether life would have been much easier if I had chosen another path. But if that means I would never have met you, then what is the point to living the easiest life? It's you who make me feel complete, and it's you who make me feel alive. Even knowing you may not be able to hold my
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