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• Executive has been approved for installation of data systems in phase I.
• Mr.Faheem has been committed to complete on 1st week of October.
• We are to take advantages of on loom inspection systems.
1. To reduced point.
2. In time corrective action for improvement of fabric quality.
• Executive and all the member has been agreed to increased production target on November.
• Executive instructed to controlled surplus manpower in department.
• Executive manager controlled yarn material wastage in the department.
• Executive instructed manager redesigned sticker.

Haoqide · Accepted Answer

I'll do what I can to help you...let's see.

• Executive has been approved for installation of data systems in phase I.

I would say:

Executive has been approved for the installation of data systems in phase I. <--I'm assuming that "Executive" is the name of a company?

• Mr.Faheem has been committed to complete on 1st week of October.

Mr. Faheem has committed to completing the work by the first week of October.

• We are to take advantages of on loom inspection systems.
1. To reduced point.
2. In time corrective action for improvement of fabric quality.

I'm not sure I understand what you're going for here. I don't totally under stand #1...but, how about something like..."We are to take advantage of on-loom inspection systems to reduce points and improve fabric quality."

• Executive and all the member has been agreed to increased production target on November.

Executive and its members have all agreed to increase production targets for November.

• Executive instructed to controlled surplus manpower in department.

Executive has been instructed to maintain proper staffing in each department. <--I'm not so sure about this one, but I'm REALLY tired, so sorry!

• Executive manager controlled yarn material wastage in the department.

Executive's managers are to minimize the waste of material in the departments.

• Executive instructed manager redesigned sticker.

Ok, I'm not sure who "executive" is now. Is it a man? Is it a company? What is it? If you can give me that information, I can try to be more help to you.

Shosdm · Answer

You help me.

I very thank full you

very very thacks.............

Haoqide · Answer

You're very welcome!

Please correct my sentences thanks

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