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Son James Posted 13 years ago
* The picture is in the attached file.
You can see only one side road in this picture.Focused on this road, there are tables covered by white clothes on the left of the road. They are outside the place looks a restaurant, where some customers are taking seats. A customer is eating and another customer is talking with the other. Especially the woman in the second table looks to read a magazine. In this picture, you can see the backside of a woman wearing a black jean,suspenders, and a white shirt.
Thank you in advance for your teaching.
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* The picture is in the attached file.
You can see only one side road in this picture.Focused on this road, there are tables covered by white clothes on the left of the road. They are outside the place looks a restaurant, where some customers are taking seats. A customer is eating and another customer is talking with the other. Especially the woman in the second table looks to read a magazine. In this picture, you can see the backside of a woman wearing a black jean,suspenders, and a white shirt.
Thank you in advance for your teaching.
Top answer
You can see only one side of the street in this picture. There are tables covered with white cloths outside a restaurant, where some customers are sitting. One customer is eating and some others are talking.
- You can see only one side of the street in this picture.
- There are tables covered with white cloths outside a restaurant, where some customers are sitting.
- One customer is eating and some others are talking.
- The woman at the second table is reading a magazine.
- Walking along the sidewalk is a woman wearing a white shirt and black jeans with suspenders.
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You can see only one side of the street in this picture. There are tables covered with white cloths outside a restaurant, where some customers are sitting. One customer is eating and some others are talking. The woman at the second table is reading a magazine. Walking along the sidewalk is a woman wearing a white shirt and black jeans with suspenders.
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Wow! I could much more easily understand your sentences than mine. Can I ask you one more? For your last sentence, "Walking along the sidewalk is a woman wearing a white shirt and black jeans with suspenders" . It's structure is a little particular to me. Does it means, I mean its origin, " There is a woman wearing a white shirt and black jeans with suspenders,walking along the sidewalk
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Son James It's structure is a little particular to me. Does it means, I mean its origin, " There is a woman wearing a white shirt and black jeans with suspenders,walking along the sidewalk",right?Yes, that's right. Please notice in this passage and your other how I have combined sentences to avoid duplication.
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Yes! I will see your writing again and again. It is big helpful for me to avoid duplication and learn how to more easily write what I express. Thank you so much for your teaching,Mr.Micawber
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