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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Please correct my sentences.

Hello,
Could you tell me whether the following sentences are correct.
  1. I feel sad without them because we spend happy hours together, which are filled with laugh, jokes and smiles.
  2. I feel sad without them because we spend happy hours, which are filled with laugh, jokes and smiles, together. (I think it's incorrect)
  3. I feel sad and lost without them because we spend happy, filled with laugh, jokes and smiles hours together.
  4. I feel sad without them because we spend happy hours together, filled with laugh, jokes and smiles.
  5. I feel sad without them because we spend happy hours, filled with laugh, jokes and smiles together.
I would be grateful if you helped me.
Thank you in advance.
  

Top answer

Hi, Could you tell me whether the following sentences are correct. Some comments on all six. You need to say 'laughs' or 'laughter'.

— Clive

  • Hi, Could you tell me whether the following sentences are correct.
  • Some comments on all six.
  • You need to say 'laughs' or 'laughter'.
  • 'Spend.
  • .
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Hi,

Could you tell me whether the following sentences are correct.

Some comments on all six.
You need to say 'laughs' or 'laughter'.
'Spend. . . which are' suggests a current habit, ie you did this before, and will do it again.
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Write this:

I feel sad without them because we spend happy hours together, filled with laughter, jokes and smiles.
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You may write this way,

I feel sad without them because we have spent happy hours together filled with laughters, jokes and smiles.
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