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Kane159 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my sentences

Hi,
is the following excerpt written correctly?

In my opinion,the movie was created so that everybody could comprehend it smoothly,that means – you will not encounter any difficulties during the movie,and the plot itself is quite simple. It´s up to you whether you find it worth watching or not,but as far as I am concerned,the movie kind of disappointed me. I have seen better ones.

Thank you in advance!
  

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In my opinion, the movie was created produced so that everybody could clearly comprehend it smoothly . That means that you will not encounter any difficulties during understanding the movie , and the plot itself is quite simple. It´s up to you whether you find it worth watching or not; but, as far as I am concerned, the movie kind of disappointed me.

— Roman Zangief

  • In my opinion, the movie was created produced so that everybody could clearly comprehend it smoothly .
  • That means that you will not encounter any difficulties during understanding the movie , and the plot itself is quite simple.
  • It´s up to you whether you find it worth watching or not; but, as far as I am concerned, the movie kind of disappointed me.
  • I have seen better ones.
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In my opinion, the movie was created produced so that everybody could clearly comprehend it smoothly. That means that you will not encounter any difficulties during understanding the movie, and the plot itself is quite simple. It´s up to you whether you find it worth watching or not; but, as far as I am concerned, the movie kind of disappointed me. I ha
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