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SHD Posted 17 years ago
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This department is doing various tasks in the efficient manner to help to execute the project and maintenance work scheduled time since the company is established.

We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction. The corresponding delivery not is to be signed by the concern party especially, the items which need to be delivered to the subcontractor should be signed by the subcontracts’ authorized person.

In case any staff are request us to modify / order additional furniture for their office, we will not carry out any work without MD’s written approval unless otherwise instructed by GM, so the concern person should obtain the written approval from GM prior to proceed the request to our department.
  

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Hi, I'll highlight some parts that you need to consider again and improve. This department is doing various tasks in the efficient manner to help to execute the project and maintenance work scheduled time since the company is established. We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction.

  • Hi, I'll highlight some parts that you need to consider again and improve.
  • This department is doing various tasks in the efficient manner to help to execute the project and maintenance work scheduled time since the company is established.
  • We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction.
  • The corresponding delivery not is to be signed by the concern party especially, the items which need to be delivered to the subcontractor should be signed by the subcontracts’ authorized person.
  • In case any staff are request us to modify / order additional furniture for their office, we will not carry out any work without MD’s written approval unless otherwise instructed by GM, so the concern person should obtain the written approval from GM prior to proceed the request to our department.
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Hi,

I'll highlight some parts that you need to consider again and improve.

This department is doing various tasks in the efficient manner to help to execute the project and maintenance work scheduled time since the company is established.

We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction. The corresponding delivery not is to be signed by
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Are these sentence correct?

This department is doing various tasks in a professional and efficient manner to help to execute the Project and Maintenance work within the scheduled time since the company is established.



We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction. But the corresponding delivery not is to be signed by the concerned
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Hi again,

This is much better. Do want to try again?

Clive

This department is doing various tasks in a professional and efficient manner to help to execute the Project and Maintenance work within the scheduled time since the company is established.



We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction. But the correspondin
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Yes, I want to try again. Followings are my corrected version of the above

This department is doing various tasks in a professional and efficient manner to help to execute the Project and Maintenance work within the scheduled time since the company established.



We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction. But the corresponding del
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Hi,

This department is doing various tasks in a professional and efficient manner to help to execute the Project and Maintenance work within the scheduled time since the company established.



We will arrange for the delivery of items to the site only on written instruction. But the corresponding delivery note is to be signed by the concerned party . Especially
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Any of those book will do.

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