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1-She went to the local salon for black hairdressing (P.K.’s).
2-In the female section of P.K.'s, sets Irie waiting her role.

3-Hairdressers are usually using ammonia to make the hair straight.
4-The scalp needs dirt for protection when using ammonia, therefor the hair must not be newly washed.
  

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's, the local salon , for black hairdressing. ' s sets Irie , awaiting her role. 3-Hairdressers usually use ammonia to straighten hair.

  • 's, the local salon , for black hairdressing.
  • ' s sets Irie , awaiting her role.
  • 3-Hairdressers usually use ammonia to straighten hair.
  • 4-The scalp needs dirt for protection when using ammonia ; therefore the hair must not be newly washed.
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1-She went to P.K.'s, the local salon, for black hairdressing.
2-In the female section of P.K.'s sets Irie, awaiting her role.
3-Hairdressers usually use ammonia to straighten hair.
4-The scalp needs dirt for protection when using ammonia; therefore the hair must not be newly washed.
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Hi,
1-She went to P.K.'s, the local salon for black hairdressing.

2-In the female section of P.K.'s, Irie sat waiting for her role. What do you mean by 'role'? Say it another way. Do you mean she was waiting for her turn?

3-Hairdressers usually use ammonia to make hair straight.

4-The scalp needs dirt for protection when ammonia is used, and therefore
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Thank you very much Mister Micawber

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