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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Please correct my sentences!

Hi!

Could you please check if there are any mistakes in the following sentences:

a) "Mention some positive and negative aspects of TV set";

b) "What kind of beverage really refreshes you and what kind of food whets your appetite?";

c) "How many years later TV became a reality?"

d) "Nowadays TV is popular and has become not only a way of entertainment, but also an educational tool".

e) Some people are more violent due to the amount of violence broadcasted.

Best regards,

Maggy
  

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" e) Some people have become more violent because of the amount of violence broadcasted.

  • " e) Some people have become more violent because of the amount of violence broadcasted.
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a) "Mention some positive and negative aspects of television";

c) "How many years later TV became a reality?" -- I see no real meaning in this sentence

d) "Nowadays TV is popular and has become not only an entertainment but also an educational tool."

e) Some people have become more violent because of the amount of violence broadcasted.
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Hello, Mistrer Micawber!

Thanks for your help,

Maggy

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