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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my sentences.

You was selected for our esteemed organisation to work with us as a `computer programmer' in the last month, as you know. So hereby we request you to follow the following procedure to get appointment letter from us.

(1) Pay $1700 before 25th.

(2) You must have passing certificate of your major subject.

Duly fill the attached form, and submit along with your payment of $1700 before June 25th.

Please correct my sentences.
  

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Not good, Gary--the impression is rather rude, too Do not speak of your own company/organization/wife etc as 'esteemed'. Try: Last month, you were selected to work with us as a computer programmer. Please take the following steps to obtain your letter of appointment: (1) Submit the passing certificate for your major subject.

— Mister Micawber

  • Not good, Gary--the impression is rather rude, too Do not speak of your own company/organization/wife etc as 'esteemed'.
  • Try: Last month, you were selected to work with us as a computer programmer.
  • Please take the following steps to obtain your letter of appointment: (1) Submit the passing certificate for your major subject.
  • (2) Fill in the attached form and submit it along with your payment of $1700 before June 25th.
  • (Personally, I find it shocking that your company is charging a person to be hired.
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Not good, Gary--the impression is rather rude, too Do not speak of your own company/organization/wife etc as 'esteemed'. Try:

Last month, you were selected to work with us as a computer programmer. Please take the following steps to obtain your letter of appointment:


(1) Submit the passing certificate for your major subject.
(2) Fill in the attached
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