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Pilita Posted 21 years ago
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Please correct my sentences..
0 this is a formal essay, I mean using formal english, but I think these sentences are so simple.I need help please! 02 br
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00 1#Latinos made up the upper and lower class in the U.S society. 02 br
00 2#In spite of the fact that the government has been closed many educational programs for Latinos by lack of economic resources, Latinos are interested in learning English and going to college. 02 br
00 3#Along with being stereotyped uneducated, Latinos are considered poor people. 0-
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00 1#Latinos made up the upper and lower class in the U.S society. 02 br
00 2#In spite of the fact that the government has been closed many educational programs for Latinos by lack of economic resources, Latinos are interested in learning English and going to college. 02 br
00 3#Along with being stereotyped uneducated, Latinos are considered poor people. 0-
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0 These are my corrections, though I admit, I could still be wrong. 02 br 02 br 00 THESE SENTENCES ARE FROM a formal essay, I mean using formal English, AND I think THAT these sentences are NOT so simple. I need YOUR help please!
- 0 These are my corrections, though I admit, I could still be wrong.
- 02 br 02 br 00 THESE SENTENCES ARE FROM a formal essay, I mean using formal English, AND I think THAT these sentences are NOT so simple.
- I need YOUR help please!
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- 02 br 00 2# DESPITE the fact that the government has closed many educational programs for Latinos FOR lack of economic resources, Latinos are interested in learning English and going to college.
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0 These are my corrections, though I admit, I could still be wrong. 02 br
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00 THESE SENTENCES ARE FROM a formal essay, I mean using formal English, AND I think THAT these sentences are NOT so simple. I need YOUR help please! 02 br
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00 1#Latinos MAKE up the upper and lower class in U.S society. 02 br
00 2# DESPITE the fact that the governmen
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00 THESE SENTENCES ARE FROM a formal essay, I mean using formal English, AND I think THAT these sentences are NOT so simple. I need YOUR help please! 02 br
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00 1#Latinos MAKE up the upper and lower class in U.S society. 02 br
00 2# DESPITE the fact that the governmen
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0 Thank you Temico for your suggestions!!!.I am getting confused using comma between items in a series. I got these examples from a website: 02 br
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00 Use commas to separate items in a series. 02 br
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00 1. The street vendor sold watches,necklaces,and earrings. 02 br
00 2.The exercise instructor told us to inhale,exhale,and relax. 02 br
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00 Use commas to separate items in a series. 02 br
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00 1. The street vendor sold watches,necklaces,and earrings. 02 br
00 2.The exercise instructor told us to inhale,exhale,and relax. 02 br
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0 Which website did you get these sentences from, may I ask? 02 br
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00 To my knowledge, sentence 1. should be either:- 02 br
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00 i) The street vendor sold watches, necklaces and earrings. 02 br
00 ii) The street vendor sold watches, necklaces, earrings, etc.,.... 02 br
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00 Sentence 2. should be:- 02 br
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00 To my knowledge, sentence 1. should be either:- 02 br
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00 i) The street vendor sold watches, necklaces and earrings. 02 br
00 ii) The street vendor sold watches, necklaces, earrings, etc.,.... 02 br
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00 Sentence 2. should be:- 02 br
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0 Hello Pilita, hello Temico 02 br
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00 I believe it's common in the US to use a comma after each item in a series, e.g. 02 br
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00 1. 'The street vendor sold watches, necklaces, and earrings.' 02 br
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00 You'll also find this usage in books printed by some UK presses, e.g. Oxford University Press. It's the older method, and is known
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00 I believe it's common in the US to use a comma after each item in a series, e.g. 02 br
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00 1. 'The street vendor sold watches, necklaces, and earrings.' 02 br
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00 You'll also find this usage in books printed by some UK presses, e.g. Oxford University Press. It's the older method, and is known
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