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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my sentence, tq

Dear Jim,

Please refer to the attached revised agreement for Ray for your review and comments, if any. Changes made are:

term of duration

safety training shall be absorbed by COMPANY

Insurance by COMPANY

The rest remain the same.

Once agreed, we will pass two copies to him for execution.
  

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Dear Jim, Please refer to the attached revised agreement for Ray, for your review and comments, if any. Changes made are: 1) Term of duration 2) Safety training to be absorbed by the company 3) Insurance to be provided by the company The rest remains the same. Once agreed, we will pass two copies of the same to him, for execution.

— Askshameer

  • Dear Jim, Please refer to the attached revised agreement for Ray, for your review and comments, if any.
  • Changes made are: 1) Term of duration 2) Safety training to be absorbed by the company 3) Insurance to be provided by the company The rest remains the same.
  • Once agreed, we will pass two copies of the same to him, for execution.
  • /Sameer
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Dear Jim,

Please refer to the attached revised agreement for Ray, for your review and comments, if any. Changes made are:

1) Term of duration

2) Safety training to be absorbed by the company

3) Insurance to be provided by the company

The rest remains the same.

Once agreed, we will pass two copies of the same to him, for execution.

/Sa
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