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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct my sentence, thanks

I sent the document to you not Mary, and after checked with Fedex that the document has been received on 17 July by Mr. Jhonson. Would you please double check and advise if there any help
  

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I sent the document to you , not Mary, and afterward I checked / and after checking with Fedex that the document was received on 17 July by Mr. Johnson . Would you please double-check and advise if there is any problem?

— Mister Micawber

  • I sent the document to you , not Mary, and afterward I checked / and after checking with Fedex that the document was received on 17 July by Mr.
  • Johnson .
  • Would you please double-check and advise if there is any problem?
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I sent the document to you, not Mary, and afterward I checked / and after checking with Fedex that the document was received on 17 July by Mr. Johnson. Would you please double-check and advise if there is any problem?
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I had sent the document to you, not Mary. Besides that, it was sent after checking with Fedex that the document was/had been received on 17th July by Mr. Jhonson. Would you please consider double-checking this statement and appoint any advise whatsoever?


Uuurrmm, I'm not really sure whether the last sentence is your question or part of the s
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In any case, some of your corrections are not correct, AnonElle. Please do not advise other students if your English level is not high enough.
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Whoa..OUCH that hurts... What a discouragement..Emotion: rolleyes
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It is not meant to be; it is a reality check. You have just joined us, AnonElle-- you have made only 7 posts. At any internet forum, it is considered wise to spend a good bit of time reading through threads to understand the topics and level of discussions before one plunges in to participate. For you, it would be better to try to answer some simpler questions like the ones, for instance, that
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I sent the document to you, not to Mary, and afterwards i checked / and after checking it with Fedex that the document was received on 17th July by Mr. Johnson. Would you please recheck it and inform if there is any problem?
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bhavna vohraI sent the document to you, not to Mary, and afterwards I checked it with Fedex that the document was received on 17th July by Mr. Johnson. Would you please recheck/double-check it and
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