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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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please correct my sentence, thanks

0To recap our conversation of two weeks ago, please pay the debit note of USDxx. This is due to the late documentation charge arising because we were discussed for who should send the document to the forwarder and we helped to send it finally but as a result it was late. 0-
  

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0There are two sentences here. The first one seems to be all right. But that sentence sounds like a creditor asking a customer to pay a bill.

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  • 0There are two sentences here.
  • The first one seems to be all right.
  • But that sentence sounds like a creditor asking a customer to pay a bill.
  • The second sentence sounds like the customer explaining why the payment is being made late.
  • 02br 02br 00 The second sentence is a run-on sentence as well.
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0There are two sentences here. The first one seems to be all right. But that sentence sounds like a creditor asking a customer to pay a bill. The second sentence sounds like the customer explaining why the payment is being made late. So the two sentences don't quite make sense--they seem to be written by two different people.02br
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