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Jinwon Lee Posted 9 years ago
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I am going to go to Hongkong on 23th of August.
For that reason, I searched on the internet to find good places for dining.
I found two restaurants where I can understand real life style of ordinary people in Hongkong.
First, Bing kee
It's a famous street restaurant for all locals located in east side of downtown.
Noodles, toast and milk tea are the local favorites.
The second one is Honeymoon dessert. It's famous for different kinds of pancakes.
Mango pancake is the most I'd like to try.

I hope I have a lot of fun although, I will stay there only 7 hours.

  

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Jinwon Lee It's a famous street restaurant for all locals located in THE east side of downtown. You may need capitals - is 'downtown' a description or a name? Jinwon Lee The second one is Honeymoon D essert I'm assuming the capitalisation of Dessert is necessary here.

  • Jinwon Lee It's a famous street restaurant for all locals located in THE east side of downtown.
  • You may need capitals - is 'downtown' a description or a name?
  • Jinwon Lee The second one is Honeymoon D essert I'm assuming the capitalisation of Dessert is necessary here.
  • Jinwon Lee Mango pancake is the most I'd like to try.
  • Not correct use of English.
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Jinwon LeeIt's a famous street restaurant for all locals located in THE east side of downtown.

You may need capitals - is 'downtown' a description or a name?

Jinwon LeeThe second one is Honeymoon Dessert

I'm assuming the capitalisation of Dessert is necessary here.

Jinwon LeeMan

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