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Kentoco Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my sentence.

All web designers have to study the new style that everyone is interested in. otherwise, you cannot be web designer. You need to be updated.
  

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Kentoko; Welcome to English forums! All web designers have to study the new style that everyone is interested in. O therwise, you cannot be a web designer.

  • Kentoko; Welcome to English forums!
  • All web designers have to study the new style that everyone is interested in.
  • O therwise, you cannot be a web designer.
  • You need to be update your skills and knowledge.
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Kentoko;

Welcome to English forums!

All web designers have to study the new style that everyone is interested in.
Otherwise, you cannot be a web designer.
You need to be update your skills and knowledge..
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Thank you for your help. I asked other native speaker as well, He said
All web designers have to study new things that are interesting to everyone. Otherwise, you would not be successful and therefore being up-to-date with your knowledge is crucial.
Does this sound more natural for a native speaker than my original sentence?
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kentocoDoes this sound more natural for a native speaker than my original sentence?
Not really. It sounds like a foreigner.

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