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Rcteja Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please correct my sentence.

When i was kid i could get sleep while listening my grany stories but now a days i cant sleep because of listening my girl friend stories.
  

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Hi. When I was a kid I could get to sleep while listening to my gran n y 's stories but now a days I can ' t sleep while listening to my girl friend 's stories. Regards

— Hrsanei

  • Hi.
  • When I was a kid I could get to sleep while listening to my gran n y 's stories but now a days I can ' t sleep while listening to my girl friend 's stories.
  • Regards
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Hi.


When I was a kid I could get to sleep while listening to my granny's stories but now a days I can't sleep while listening to my girl friend's stories.



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I have one thing to add to hrsanei's answer (just the comma):

When I was a kid I could get to sleep while listening to my granny's stories, but now a days I can't sleep while listening to my girl friend's stories.


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Yes you are right.

In addition, nowadays should not be spaced and must be attached .

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rctejaWhen i was kid i could get sleep while listening my grany stories but now a days i cant sleep because of listening my girl friend stories.
This would a more natural version:

When I was kid, I would go to sleep while listening to my granny's stories. But nowadays, I can't fall asleep becaose I have to listen to my girlfriend's stories.

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